r-17's Reviews

[Master & Cat clean kitchn]

Kindly offering

Wow, this & Ariel are both great! The humor is definitely a nice touch, but the artwork you've got on here is above and beyond your previous work and anything I've seen on Newgrounds. Awesome job!

I hope #3 will be soon to come, or anything else you've got on the way.

[Throwback the Duck Ep. 1A]

Can't wait to see where this goes

I like the fact that, with a fair degree of cartoon and gaming things worked in, this is a real, genuine bona fide storyline, with characters, a degree of depth in them, and a humor in all the right places. There's a few parts where things are a little campy, but hey, he's a duck. And he's hailing from the early gaming era; the same bundle of time that brought us Ewoks, talking bears, gremlins, and who knows what else. For the most part, this is much more like watching a movie than a cartoon since it has direction in it. I can't wait to see what happens with the fallen star.

The characters are cool. Throwback is very cool. The drawings & animation are superb. Excellent work!

[Demon Slayer's Diary]

sw33t!

That's was awesome; it seems like something of a cross between Devil Hunter Yohko, FLCL and Azumanga Daioh, only better! What I really like about your animation is that it has it has a cool effects and moves along with the quirky stuff. It would nice to see something longer, and maybe a bit more drawn out since it goes by in the blink of an eye, but this is uncontestably cool stuff. ;)

[L33T - English translator]

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[Gravity V.0]

Sw33t game!

That's actually pretty impressive; I like the way the ball bobs and weaves, like using the jetpack on a certain N64 game. It definitely plays well, and with a good model you can do a ton of things with it.

You should soup this thing up with some graphics or start making some crazy traps to go along with it. Flypaper, slow moving red blocks, dragons; there's ton of ways it could go. Keep up the good work!

[Flying Spaghetti Monster]

That...was absolutely histerical!

You game is great! The control is challenging, but good because otherwise this could be way too easy. Excellent ending. This is definitely an innovative take on your typical grain-based alien prostelitization thriller.

PlasmicSteve responds:

You said it, R-17!!!

I mean "r".

[Hammi - Mission Karlos preview]

Cool grit

This is definitely nice sounding stuff, though I'm not really sure if it best belongs in Pop. Something tells me there will be more to it beyond the preview. It's a good set of beats, and I can definitely see this developing into something great when some more melodic flavor is added into it. Keep it up

Hammi responds:

Thanx! Yeah i know, i didnt know where else to place it XD Anyways, thanx a bunch, i will add more elements and finish the whole track some day. Then we'll see how it turns out :P

[Beat is Coming RMX]

Sweet

That's song is pretty tight; the only things I think might need work on are minimal: the phasing voice (there's just a few parts where it's not quite clear; she/he could get into the groove just a bit more), and the abrupt ending, which is also another problem I have.

Those two minor things aside, that song rocks! The rhythm is nice and simple, which is great since it makes all the cool frills you've got going on with the piano and guitar stand out. Very awesome stuff.

EchozAurora responds:

Well, it would be difficult to do anything about the vox, as it is a remix, and that was the original vocals.
As for the ending, I couldn't think of anything, so I just picked a guitar riff to go out on and left it. The good news is, due to the abrupt ending, it loops flawlessly.

[Electric Ice]

Pretty funky

I like the classy video game sound this tune's got; it feels like I'm in some kind of hot-wired futuristic ice cave. The minimalism with the ice FX and echo stuff makes for some cool elements in the tune. Keep up the cool stuff!